Fic Excerpt: "Darkness Falls" and "Home Fires Burning"

I wrote 1,242 words of Flackfic wherein he breaks the news of his engagement to his parents, but I'm not sure it's viable. It's from the perspective of Flack, Sr. as he watches his wife and son butt heads, and as of now, it's quite disjointed. I like the first three pages, but it's sparse and nondescript in terms of character development because I don't want to impart to the unreliable narrator an omniscience he cannot possibly possess as an outside observer. I'm going to work on fleshing it out, but if it doesn't look markedly better by tomorrow, I'll scrap it and rewrite it from Flack's POV, which was what I'd originally intended.

I also pounded out 785 words of Mulderfic. Since I'm working with the very limited knowledge of S1, it is more general on character specifics than I would like, but I'm confident that when finished, it will be able to stand among the astoundingly prolific and prodigious body of Xfic with no shame.

And now, fic sneak peeks:

"Darkness Falls"-X-Files


( Darkness Falls )

"Home Fires Burning"-CSI:NY



( Home Fires Burning )